tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15460509.post414688445666369820..comments2023-09-21T06:14:00.897-07:00Comments on Story Bites: Onward!: Pt. 10Renhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11901538865802589772noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15460509.post-57407843755491111492007-01-28T19:16:00.000-08:002007-01-28T19:16:00.000-08:00Yeah, I took for granted that I didn't explain Los...Yeah, I took for granted that I didn't explain Los Angeles, redubbed the City, is a sprawling mega-tropolis. Think of the Mega Cities in the Matrix film and you'll get the ideas. Don't worry I'll expand on them more in coming chapters. I am having fun writing these stories though.Renhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11901538865802589772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15460509.post-31234844847109258592007-01-28T11:59:00.000-08:002007-01-28T11:59:00.000-08:00dude, i'm not lying when i say... BADASS!!!! i so ...dude, i'm not lying when i say... BADASS!!!! i so enjoyed this!!! Ashtree sounds cool but i think he needs to be more badass. He's not the top gun for nothing, u feel me? But then when compared to the crazy Amon i guess it's feasible to have the outcome that way. i really enjoyed it and i only have ONE critique. And i think it may be something that I just don't see. Always had this problem -- I can't really visualize the environment. I mean, i picture this place with rubble and debris all around but that's it. Good thing is, when you talk about the armor and the battles, i think...Gears of War. But a totally different story. It's a VERY GOOD THING. CHPATER ONE WAS AWESOME!!!! I LOVED IT!!! can't wait for chapter 2 dude. YOU MUST KEEP GOING WITH THIS. just my opinion ;) this is something worth reading!!!introhverthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05090773884983397907noreply@blogger.com